Tuesday, November 15, 2005
haha! it's me to start the ball rolling! let's start with my very first villanelle! Fish Mongering The silver multitudes and their glassy stare Fiddle dee diddle tap dancing crabs twined Death lurks everywhere Death presents herself with a flick of the hair The flick, flick, flick choosing of the more refined And still the silver multitudes glassily stare And no on knows that death lives there In the gashed handle of that bloodthirsty swine Death lurks everywhere The wealth of talk masks the strident blare Of dead next to dead, talking in time And in the silver of the glassy eyed stare All are naked in the phrase of death, where A flash of colour merely defines Death lurks everywhere *****one more line..help!!***** Throw so much casualty in the face of life These silver multitudes merely stare Forboding. Death lurks everywhere.
-Mel
poemegrenade
Tuesday, November 15, 2005
haha! it's me to start the ball rolling! let's start with my very first villanelle! Fish Mongering The silver multitudes and their glassy stare Fiddle dee diddle tap dancing crabs twined Death lurks everywhere Death presents herself with a flick of the hair The flick, flick, flick choosing of the more refined And still the silver multitudes glassily stare And no on knows that death lives there In the gashed handle of that bloodthirsty swine Death lurks everywhere The wealth of talk masks the strident blare Of dead next to dead, talking in time And in the silver of the glassy eyed stare All are naked in the phrase of death, where A flash of colour merely defines Death lurks everywhere *****one more line..help!!***** Throw so much casualty in the face of life These silver multitudes merely stare Forboding. Death lurks everywhere.
-Mel
poemegrenade
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WRITER01 : bloom
Produces:Poems, Novels, Short Stories
Latest Reads:
1.Crime Zero by Michael Cordy
2.Miracle Strain by Michael Cordy
3.A Sunday Morning by Amy Ephron
4.Damnedifido by Percival Everett
5.Bliss by Peter Carey
6.Deception Point by Dan Brown
WRITER02:
Produces: Poems and short Short Stories
Latest Reads:
1. Death in The Afternoon by Ernest Hemingway
2. Anansi's Boys by Neil Gaiman
3. Eragon by Christopher Paolini
4. Eldest by Christopher Paolini
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